Comments on: The Third Sure Thing http://themillennialpedestrian.com/2007/02/12/the-third-sure-thing/ Poems about walking around in Central Park ... and other places. Sun, 05 Sep 2010 03:13:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=1.5.2 Comment on The Third Sure Thing by: Peter Whelan http://themillennialpedestrian.com/2007/02/12/the-third-sure-thing/#comment-802 Fri, 16 Feb 2007 13:11:26 +0000 http://themillennialpedestrian.com/2007/02/12/the-third-sure-thing/#comment-802 I forwarded it to my son. I didn't get it, your e-mail, that is. Got it this morning. - Peter :) I forwarded it to my son. I didn’t get it, your e-mail, that is. Got it this morning.
- Peter :)

]]> Comment on The Third Sure Thing by: Wally http://themillennialpedestrian.com/2007/02/12/the-third-sure-thing/#comment-800 Fri, 16 Feb 2007 04:54:29 +0000 http://themillennialpedestrian.com/2007/02/12/the-third-sure-thing/#comment-800 I don't have to like all your poems. This one doesn't get off the ground for me. Or at least not until the last stanza, when it enters the realm of the "things aren't as they seem" school... only half right. (The Wright brothers' first flight lasted 12 seconds.) But I'm still reeling from your previous dream lesson: [I had to go back and look it up] "Dung." That one killed me and the best line for me was, "Our dreams are becoming more lifelike than our lives." That's how I feel, though I didn't know it til you wrote it. That's about dreams. That's a keeper. Attention webmaster: I hate smilies, but this time I clicked one and only got the word -- "evil" -- not a picture. So I deleted it. I don’t have to like all your poems. This one doesn’t get off the ground for me. Or at least not until the last stanza, when it enters the realm of the “things aren’t as they seem” school… only half right. (The Wright brothers’ first flight lasted 12 seconds.)
But I’m still reeling from your previous dream lesson: [I had to go back and look it up] “Dung.” That one killed me and the best line for me was, “Our dreams are becoming more lifelike than our lives.” That’s how I feel, though I didn’t know it til you wrote it. That’s about dreams. That’s a keeper.

Attention webmaster: I hate smilies, but this time I clicked one and only got the word — “evil” — not a picture. So I deleted it.

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